The plot I used was "The story starts when your protagonist is forced into a car at gunpoint. Another character is an attorney who invents strange machines."
I'm actually really pleased with this one (probably could use more editing). The opening was easy to visualize and start writing, and while I had an idea for the rest it evolved into it's own work really quickly. Making me invent new characters, changing the plan I had but in a good way. Yeah, really pleased.
Enjoy.
A
Deal
“Get in.”
The dark metal of the gun barrel
gleamed in the light from the street lamp.
With the tinted window rolled half down I could just make out the
features of a grizzled old pusher with his hand on the trigger.
Far be it for me to turn down a nice
warm car ride on a rainy night.
I opened the door and climbed
inside. Grizzly slid over to make room,
keeping the gun trained on me as he handed me a bundle of sackcloth.
“Really?”
“You know the drill.”
A glance at the driver showed he wasn’t
planning to take any part in this debate, but his posture made it clear he also
wasn’t going to put the car in gear until I was blindfolded.
With a sigh I pulled the bag over my
head.
I heard the soft click of the gun’s
safety, but I didn’t make a move.
Grizzly tied my hands with a light knot, keeping them in my lap. I must not be in too much trouble then, if
there was a real problem they wouldn’t make it this easy.
Driver finally put the engine in
gear and we started moving.
I could hear the steady patter of
rain on the car’s roof and the splash of puddles as we hit potholes. The bounce sometimes enough to knock me
around my seat since neither of my escorts had me wear a seatbelt, but that was
just another sign that tonight was just going to be a talk.
When we finally stopped about an
hour later I already knew what our destination was.
I waited for Grizzly to open the
door and pull me out. I reached toward
the hood but stopped when he pressed the gun barrel into my back and used it to
guide me forward.
I shrugged internally and just kept
walking, noting when we had gone inside by the feel of the floor. I could have turned towards the correct room
but I let Grizzly guide me instead.
Stopping after a few turns I felt a bright
light overhead as Grizzly pushed me into a chair and pulled off the hood.
Walters sat on the other side of the
table, pristine white suit shining in the light. The ever present cigar pinched in his teeth,
unlit so no ashes would be spilled.
“Do you mind?” I asked, holding up my hands, “They’re
starting to chafe.”
Walters waved his hand and Grizzly
untied me.
“Coffee?” Walters asked.
“Please.”
We waited as a girl, healthy young
thing who looked good for someone paying off a drug debt, served us. I waved off her offer of ‘sugar’ as Walters
generously poured white powder into his own cup.
“I understand you have a new toy for
us?” He asked.
I made a show of taking a drink,
knowing how he lived for the theatrics.
Putting the cup down I reached into
my coat pocket and pulled out a metal cube the size of my fist. I activated it with a tap and watched it
unfold into the shape of a scorpion.
I looked up at Walters and arched an
eyebrow.
Walters nodded to Grizzly, who
placed an uncut brick of white on the table.
The scorpion immediately became
animated and crawled off my hand.
Skittering over to the brick it quickly attacked it. Spearing the brick with its tail and using
its claws to cut and shape, it carved out smaller, perfectly dimensioned
cubes.
Job done, it crawled back to my hand
and with another tap, folded itself back into a cube.
My job was done.
Walters agreed to the usual price
easily enough and I had an order for a full supply of what he was already
calling his new cutters.
Driver dropped me off where they
found me, and I gave the hood back to Grizzly as I stepped out of the car.
Once they were out of sight I
started walking, two streets down I ducked into an alley. A quick jump to the fire escape and three
fights up I was knocking on the apartment window of Marcus’ law office.
Elyse opened the window and I
climbed inside handing her my coat with a smile.
“He’s in his workshop.” She said.
“Of course he is.” I smiled.
I made my way down the hall, passing
the office which doubled as his library and letting myself into the workshop.
Marcus even looked up as I entered, unbending
from the workbench with acrid smoke rising past him. Putting his tools down he turned to me, the protective
goggles made his eyes seem more inquisitive than usual and caused his hair to
stick out in random directions.
“How’d it go?”
“He bought it, literally.”
“Fantastic!” He said.
“You’re sure this is a good
idea? We’re making it easier for him to
peddle cocaine.”
“It’s fine, I told you what the
scorpion does. When it strikes it
injects untraceable chemicals into the drug that will cause the user to lose
their addiction. Soon Walters won’t have
any customers. And the more he uses
these, the faster that will happen.”
“And the faster he’ll find someone
to blame.”
“That’s where you come in Detective,
you know where all his warehouses are thanks to the tracking bugs I built. When the time is right, break your cover and
strike. Surely you must have enough to
arrest him by now.”
“When you came to me I was hoping
you’d have enough to bring him in right away, you are his lawyer after all.”
“I had enough to lock him up, but
not to destroy his cartel. But that’s
the best part, when he calls for me to defend him we can take down his entire
operation!”
I thought about that, it almost felt
too easy. But then, Walters wasn’t
exactly the smartest crime lord I’d ever tried to bust.
Anyone who takes that much crack
with his coffee probably fried his brain years ago.
Good stuff. I like the voice of the piece. Says a lot about your MC, and it remains consistent throughout the story. I like the theme behind it too.
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